~ Wait! Look! ~

C’mon Jenny keep up!
Wait, look!
We have to get to school!
But wait, look!
Don’t stop! We cant be late again!
But wait! Look!
Mum’ll kill us and Dad’ll wallop our Butts!
Oh wait! Please just look!
What is it now?
Look at the magic
Where?
Up there in the mountains
Where?
Sunshine and warmth and happiness

C’mon, it’ll catch us up in time!

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Another RB Artist inspired poem [where would I be without seeing this art? :O)]
The fabulous Mr Bob McKain posted this panorama and when I saw the sad wet path leading away from the beauty and thought of all those country kids walking to school oblivious to the beauty they existed in and this prose/poem/story came out :O)
Well worth the composition of 7 shots!

UPDATE!
Sadly Bob is no longer bubbling which also means his awesome shot of the “Schabacher Landing at Sunrise” is also not viewable here <(
I hope all is well in Bob’s world!
Chookas! X♥X

Enjoy! :O)

adgray is a writer and a poet
- telling stories all her life,
- writing them down once she learnt how
“Scribbling! Always scribling!”
… and no there was nothing to be done about it!
Her poetry came later when the gift found her to be a ZETE segue (Zographonic Extemporanious Treatise Ekphrasis)
At times she can go into a trance-like state as poetry flows through her to the page and screen
Thank you for coming to read my words! ~ adgray~

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Comments

  • RMonroe
    RMonroeover 6 years ago

    This is wonderful and the photo is a glorious view:)

  • Thank you Robin! I love looking at Bob … erm …. Bob’s art :O)
    Love looking at yours too :O) – that yellow flowers one is dancing about in my mind collecting words too :O)
    Thank you for coming to read my words :O) and going to look at Bob … ’s art :O)
    Chookas! ♥

    – adgray

  • Sherrianne Talon
    Sherrianne Talonover 6 years ago

    Beautiful…. so true.

  • Isn’t it Sherri – sometimes I think it takes the purity of innocence to help you see what is really there!
    Bob’s art shows you everything so clearly and I cant help but write to his work :O)
    Thank you for reading my words :O) and looking at his art! :O)
    Chookas X♥X

    – adgray

  • bmckain
    bmckainover 6 years ago

    Thanks adgray,

    Really enjoyed this.

  • Well I really enjoy looking at you…..r art :O) {blushing} lol :O)
    Thank you for your last 3 panorama pieces and next time you’re going to Alaska TAKE ME!!!
    No – wait … how bout when I finally become rich and famous writer I organise a trip of the Americas – to write a story about it – and I take you as my official photographer! :O)
    Chookas! X♥X

    – adgray

  • Miri
    Miriover 6 years ago

    i love that the image provoked this…..it is amazing how often people don’t notice the beauty around them :-)

  • So true! I believe that sometimes it takes just a moment to stop take a breath relax with a smile and rejuvenate the soul! Then find there is more energy to go on!
    So read my reply to Bob and I’ll take you too :O) Collaborative writers – or you can be my editor and keep me on the laptop and not partying the nights away with the locals lol :O) {well not alone! lol}
    Chookas! XX♥XX

    – adgray

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