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Reach for the pebbles lining the shore
Which way is up? I don’t know anymore
The clouds look so real and the water false
I can’t hear my heartbeat or feel my pulse
But it is peaceful … and floating … and free
And I have no further wish to be me
“C L E A R !"
Yes another of my RB art inspired versesThe wonderful Stuart Chapman posted a reworked pic and I was filled with this poem so fast I almost wrote holding my breath!Wonder if it fits into Flash Fiction or Twisted Tales :O)
beach waves crashing poetry inspiration floating
Simply DIVINE!!! such beautiful words that embody the image magically!!!
Thank you :O) you were quick! lol So glad you read my words and stopped to tell me you liked them :O)Chookas! ♥
Do you know … I’ve had a recurring dream since I was a child of being just an entity being washed backwards and forwards by the ripples on a beach as the tide comes in – a wonderful peaceful feeling … this poem speaks my dream.
this is great, well done
Very well written, with a great flow to it !
another good one, love The clouds look so real and the water false flows so well
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