~ Whistle ma Wanderings Hame ~

adgray
Author: adgray
Word Count: 282
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~ Whistle ma Wanderings Hame ~

Another of my RB art inspired poetry.
This came to me seeing our good friend Joak’s wonderful photo of glorious majestic mountains!
I “heard” it in a Scottish accent but could not write it with one so with help from my other good friend Jen Whyte it has been transposed into the Scottish sounding text so you can ken what I heard :O)
[NB: for all you wooses I have pasted the English version in also :O) ]
Enjoy! :O)

~ Whistle ma Wanderings Hame ~ belongs to the following groups:

Current Issues, Live, Love, Dream, The Scots are Coming and WMG

Polish the siller that shines on the tap
High abin heather and glen
An’ think o’ the eons of courage and prayer
’Til a whistle ma wanderings hame

Ye cannae be greetin’ I’ve no’ been gone lang
Ye’ cannae be hiding ma bairn, my young
And ye cannae be wishing the day wisnae done
When I whistle ma wanderings hame

The valleys I’ve travelled the hills I have climbed
And the folks I’ve speared wi’ in body and mind
And ye’ cannae believe the sichts I hae seen
As I whistle my wanderings hame

But I willnae gae wandering awa’ again noo
I willnae go spearing how faur I can go
I’ll bide near ma hame hearth and play with my son
And whistle ma wanderings wi’ you my love
And whistle ma wanderings wi’ you

and in English
Polish the silver that shines on the top
High above the heather and glen
and think of the eons of courage and prayer
and whistle my wandering back home

And you cannot be crying I’ve not been gone long
You cannot be hiding my bairn my young
And you cannot be wishing the day was not gone
when I whistle my wandering home

The valleys I’ve travelled the hills I have climbed
and people I’ve spoken with body and mind
and can you believe the sights I have seen
as I whistled my wandering home

but I will not go wandering away again now
I will not go seeing what yonder I can
I will stay near my home hearth and play with my son
and whistle my wandering with you, my love
and whistle my wandering with you

  • carlotta peacock

    carlotta peacock

    Excellent work gorgeous xx

  • adgray replied

    Thank you Carlotta :O)
    Not bad for a 3 way collaboration huh! :O)
    But didn’t Joak capture the mountain tops well !! ♥
    Keep Happy :O)

  • joak

    joak

    its a million times better in scots is it no…but then everythin scots is better! jen has done a braw translation ta for the promo oan ma work …it needs aw the help it kin get! yer poetry is great by the way its amazin whit ye kin dae when ye dinny huv tae clean the hoose!

  • adgray replied

    Aye that it is! That’s why I asked for you to help me! lol :O)
    I “heard” it in Scots but I couldn’t type it in Scots!
    Now it’s done and done well and I feel all the better for it !!
    Thank you my big cuddly friend :O) xx ♥ xx

  • Jan Stead JEMproductions

    Jan Stead JEMp...

    what can I say?
    But that you’ve outdone yourself this time!!
    THere’s no stopping you it seems, and like a good wine in a cask, you just get better and better with time!!

    (not meant to be slight/insult)

    : )

  • adgray replied

    :O) Always thought of myself as a good whiskey :O) they take 40 + years to mature :O) heeheeheeheehee
    Thank you my friend for reading & liking my words again! :O) xx ♥ xx

  • Miri

    Miri

    that is great – so much better in Scots – makes me a bit homesick even tho i was a welsh girl living in England!!
    really fits with the great shot too

  • adgray replied

    Thank you it does fit with Joak’s great shot doesn’t it :O)
    and thank you for favouring my work too :O)
    Chookas gal :O) xx ♥ xx

  • Jan Stead JEMproductions

    Jan Stead JEMp...

    lol!!! Hadn’t thought of whiskey!

    The pleasure is all mine I assure you….along with a few other bubblers, that is!!

    You keep writing and I/we’ll keep reading ‘em!

    Jan…....xx

    : )

  • adgray replied

    DEAL! :O)
    But you have to keep it coming too! :O)
    Chookas my friend xx ♥ xx

  • Jan Stead JEMproductions

    Jan Stead JEMp...

    ok…I’ll try….
    DEAL! :O)

    Jan…......xx

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