~ Soft the Dawn ~
Another Bubbler Inspired piece.
For my friend Mary
Your art drew breath to my poetry
Mary has very kindly given me the link to her picture to add and we are organising collaborating and amalgamating the two together for sale :o)
How special is that! :o)
Until I upload my collaboration poster you can view Mary’s here
Again thank you so much Mary for breathing life into my words :O)
And you have to agree
Such gorgeous colours so muted soft and sweet
Many a night has ended in exquisite dawns like this
Thank you! ♥
Enjoy! :O)
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~ Soft the Dawn ~ belongs to the following groups:
"Exceptional Ekphrasis", All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Light In The Darkness, Live, Love, Dream, Mature Woman, The Patchwork , The Urban Environment and WMG
Cool is the breeze that blows in the golden morning light
Shall we stroll the beach front at the ending of this night
Will we dare to brave the wind up upon the pier
Will you hold me will you kiss me will you wipe away my tear
And shall we watch the dawning never wanting the daylight come
Holding still and shallow breaths willing away the sun
For then we shall be parting your world alien to mine
Where only secret sweet memories will last the test of time
Tom Broderick IPA
great work. tom
adgray replied
Thank you Tom :o)
Mysticmoon
Brings back wonderful sweet memories ….... life is beautiful and so is your poetry!!
adgray replied
Thank you so much Mystic :o)
Your comments make me feel special :o)
adgray replied
Just wanted to add a ♥ cos you make me feel happy :o) xox
Jan Stead JEMp...
Wow!!!
Wonderful, flowing, peaceful and graceful words, as usual.
But your gift for creating mood with your celver crafting of the English language is not surprise; I am reminded yet again how amazing your work, your poems are!!!
: )
adgray replied
Oh My Jan You render me speechless!
I feel honoured that my words would evoke such a wonderful comment from you.
Thank you so much! I am indeed humbled and honoured! Thank you ♥
Miri
aw that is so sweet, simply lovely :-)
adgray replied
Thank you so much Miri :o) ♥
adgray replied
Miri Look!
Mary is collaborating with me and we shall have this as a duet – cards etc – for sale :o) I am so happy :o)
Jan Stead JEMp...
no more than you deserve!!
Your gift is great.
: )
adgray replied
That is indeed a compliment of merit coming from you ma’am
Thank you so much! :o) xx ♥
adgray replied
Jan Look!
Mary is collaborating with me and has given me the link to add her pic here and we shall have this as a duet – cards etc – for sale :o)
I am so happy :o) xx ♥ xx
Mary Campbell
Just perfect for this picture, and for me..
I hope this works..
adgray replied
YAY!!! It worked for you and for me! :o)
Gorgeous!
Thank you so much Mary my friend ♥
girlinthestars
so perfectly romantic! I felt the love~*
adgray replied
Thank you girl, I have felt love like this and lost it often
Thankfully I have my last love with me forever now! :o)
Keep Happy! :o) x♥x
Miri
that is wonderful!! love it…great work from both of you :-)
adgray replied
Thank you Miri – Her art is gorgeous is it not :O)
Dayonda
Congratulations on having your lovely, romantic work featured.
adgray replied
IS IT???? WOOOOOHOOOOOOO!!!!!!! :O)
have to go look! :O)
Thank you Dayonda for telling me and for dropping in to have a peek :O)
Keep Happy! :O)
Dayonda
LOL—yes—I read on my activity list that I had one featured, too. LOL, so now we know you don’t check that very often, don’t we? lol It looked at first as if I had written it to myself, so I had to stop and read it to see what was going on. Surprise to us both, then! =0)
adgray replied
lol you’re so right!
I write because that’s what my hands and head do best together! lol
You mean people are reading it and LIKING it ???? lol
Must put out a generic sorry I missed the favouriting but thank you for liking my words :O) lol
and now off to peek through your folio! :O) Chookas! ♥
MetalDragoness
congratulations on your last love in which you can feel this wonderful joy. A beautiful portrait and a wonderful poem to go with it. very nice
adgray replied
Thank you so much Ms Dragoness :O)
So good of you to drop in and read my words and look at Mary’s pic :O)
Keep Happy! :O)
Tim Everding
Fantastic work as always adgray! :)
adgray replied
Thank you Mr Tim
But I had the awesome inspiration of Mary’s picture to kick start me :O)
Thank you for reading my words :O)
Chookas! X♥X
Suzanne German
I love this…absolutely describes the love in a woman’s heart so beautifully!
adgray replied
Thank you so much Suzanne :O)
Having you grace my pages with comment is an honour indeed!
So glad you like the love poem I wrote in honour of my mother’s last lost love!
Chookas! X♥X