Really see
Don’t turn away
Take a deep breath
Count back slowly from ten
Stand still and take everything in
Look straight ahead and focus your gaze
Your searching even now trying to find it
Always looking but this is your chance to see
Don’t let this moment pass you by, open your eyes

Did you see, you must have, it was right there
There on your best days to share your highs
And on your worst to soothe your pains
In the midst of the sweetest pleasure
Carries so much of your sorrows
Fills so many wanted dreams
Tends to every need
Surely you saw
Nothing but

Sometimes we look straight pass what has always been in front of us!!! Other times we are looking and hoping we will see!!!


  • Betty Smith_Voce
    Betty Smith_Voceover 4 years ago

    Truly beautiful write… So difficult though to ‘see’ with the ‘correct perspective…’

  • Thankyou very much Betty!! Often really nice to take a moment and look around!! x

    – acquaridan

  • shootback
    shootbackover 4 years ago

    You are quite an impressive writer, this wonderful!!

  • Aww Thankyou Shoot that was lovely :) !!

    – acquaridan

  • sobrechild
    sobrechildover 4 years ago

    Beautifully wirtten!!!!!

  • Thanks so much Alecia!!

    – acquaridan

  • sorina
    sorinaover 4 years ago

    too cool! :)…you can even write in geometrical shapes, counting to 10 and back, wow….awesome writing!x

  • Thanks so much Sorina for the lovely comment..just trying different wordplay!!

    – acquaridan

  • LisaMM
    LisaMMover 4 years ago

    Very, very beautiful and I absolutely love the way you set the lines to reach a crescendo in rhythm with the flow of words, very clever and poetic. I love the message too. Lovely.

  • Thanks so much Lisa for the lovely comment…was trying some different wordplay..always nice to stop and take a look!!

    – acquaridan

  • TheUnknowngnome
    TheUnknowngnomeover 4 years ago

    Do I really see a part of a frontal anatomy?

  • I don’t know do you??

    – acquaridan

  • binuinyou
    binuinyouover 4 years ago

    yes… YOU … x

  • Oh Thanks Bin :)

    – acquaridan

  • Melanie6
    Melanie6over 4 years ago

    I love this, so true… I love the way you built the words up and down, like reading music to the words, very talented :)

  • Oh Mel your too kind thanks for the lovely comment!!

    – acquaridan

  • CreativeKitty
    CreativeKittyover 4 years ago

    Amazing job!

  • Oh WOW..that’s just Awesome Kitty..Thanks SO much!!!

    – acquaridan

  • CreativeKitty
    CreativeKittyover 4 years ago

    YOU are very welcome!

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