Ahhhhh. I see Abe has been to the Dalek factory in readiness for tomorrow nights Dr.Who! Yes I am excited! Just bought a new car AND Dr.Who starts again tomorrow what more does a boy want! Lovely shot Debs….lacks the Goth edge of your other stuff….is this an impending change of direction? I am watching the crappiest movie ever…I have stooped to watching Buffy the Vampire Slayer!
not sure this one works as well as your other work, I think (and it’s only my thoughts) that the boy looks too clean & nice to fit into that type of urban area ! – two pictures which don’t quite make a whole. Feel free to say that’s rubbish Deborah
Hi Dave – thanks for your comment i really do appreciate your input (honest :)) However, in defence of this image I have to say that the environment is supposed to feel alien to this boy – which it is – he is uncomfortable being there and afraid of it – it is a place on a beach and not the environment one usually associates children playing a beach with – but children do. The other thing is about him being ‘clean and nice’ – i know what you mean in the sense of other ‘documentary’ style photography – only showing kids that are dirty etc playing on council estates etc – well to be honest i didn’t go down that road as i wanted to show a different side. I was bought up on a council estate – single parent etc – no money – shared a room with mum and sister but we were always clean and respectful of other – well mannered etc – council estates, single mums aren’t always about poverty = dirt etc. I am not saying that you are implying this, I am just trying to get across the message of this image. Phew!!! But honestly I do appreciate what you say because at least you have looked and given an honest account of what it says (or doesn’t say) to you and it will make me think the next time i try and do another shot like this – so it helps. Sorry for the essay but i hope others will read this and understand the image :) Thanks again Dave and have a good day.
I love the subtle dof. the black is blacker on Abe and he’s so much sharper than the rest of the image he jumps off the screen and seem to be in alien territory, but you made him still appear to be there, not like he’s pasted on, as too often happens with dof. His expression and body language add to the impression. great control, and excellent capture. low key Gaia statement that speaks volumes. this is wonderful! :)
this is awesome. maybe its the kids hair but it has a 70’s thing to it.. maybe that’s just me but a superb photograph b & w industrial playground.. kind of place footballers used to learn their game and the rest of us used to learn how to steal cars… top notch work
vonne
Love the look = ) I check out your book VERY nice.
Deb…this one is really fantastic….what I love in this image is the innocence of the child and the background of this industril plant that is even fenced off…..”keep out”...the contrast between the 2 worlds is just amazing and I love her expression and you can just image what is running through the childs mind…...and don;t you wonder about the life….I do…..brilliant piece
Used to a DP leaving me eurphoric., but when I saw this I thought it has a real bite, and you’ve just explained to me why. Love seeing you showcase your versatility as an artist as you do in so many directions. Brilliant picture.
We should be thankful that the child’s imagination shields it from the ugliness or squalor of its environment. Not so for the adult who sees it all (if he or she has any sensibility). We see the ugliness and we have to acknowledge the reality of the world that we have brought our children into.A visual metaphor of great power, Deborah.
Just read through your thought process on this image Deb and I think you did manage to convey what you set out to. He does look uncomfortable here…like he’s gone exploring like any kid does, but hasn’t found a fairytale. It feels quite tinged with sadness..a hint of disappointment in his distant gaze. A very thought provoking, atmospheric image..great work :)
This is a real thought provoking image, there are so many ways to interpret this.
To me he looks alone, possibly lost, in a place where he shouldn’t have gone in the first place. He is afraid, uncertain and maybe even guilty for wandering somewhere he was told never to visit.
Thanks Deborah for the full reply and taking the time to do it, Having an insight into someone’s work can be very interesting & I enjoyed reading your idea behind the image, that’s great you achieved your desired effect. As you said I was only saying what I saw. It’s good to question things sometimes and I can see you like that. Regards Dave - --—-—-—-—-—-—-—-——- that’s your name off the Christmas card list …..
Deb, I checked out your picture, read through ALL the comments… actually Dave’s was the most interesting in that he puts this image in context with the ideas that most of us have grown up with, ie that ‘playgrounds’ like this are more associated with scruffier looking kids. As it happens, I think he’s honed in on the essence of your take. The kid looks middle class with clean clothes, clean face and no scars… yet he is captured with a perplexed and destitute attitude in this industrial site on the edge of nowhere. He should be romping through a woods or playing with his dog & frisbie on the other side of the beach that’s got the waves. Seems to me that there’s an increasing danger that the nice playgrounds are getting harder to find by the minute and children like this lad are sadly forced to take what they can get in our increasingly industrialized world. I’m not here to winge about that aspect of our society as I reap the benefits that it provides, and my only child is now grown up and fortunately never had to face what it looks like your boy here is going through. But I do fear for her children’s children. Your imagery makes us think and plants the idea in our heads without us even knowing you’ve done it. That’s the magic of your work and that’s why I think you are so f’ing awesome.
Fantastic picture. Yeah, we are all heroes that have to struggle in a tough world. This environment looks so unfriendly and unpersonal and cold. And places like this have such a strong atmosphere of lonelyness. It is as if he asks himself: ‘What to do with this dimension of life?’ The struggle with the uglyness of life … aarrgghh … Well, we have to go on. One foot after the other. Great soulart, Deborah.
Fabulous framing and composition. This image really does pose many questions about the modern world and our ability and desire to bring up our young in safe environments.
nodrogart
You never fail to astound me Deb, the focus is on the Boy, but I am drawn to the industrious area behind even though it is not the focal point, excellent!!!
This one’s a little bright for you Deb and I like it.
The depth works particularly well. and the clarity on Abe, down to the details of the creases in his top, together with the shadows shows that. The landscape behind does look very industrial and nothing that I would associated with beach life (other than Dungeness, but I thought that place was a law unto itself!)
Very powerful image. Your images always pack a punch and this seems to be the more powerful for the lightness in it, which sounds contradictory, but the clarity in even the soft background just adds power to the shot.
I don’t get uncomfortable from the shot, just boredom, just feel like, “Can we play on the proper bit of the beach now Mum?”
Wow, what a great shot and as always very thought provoking.. kind of makes me think of what the next generation will do with our little land… you could almost look on it as a comment on how industry is being left behind… Really great work and fantastic tones and contrasts in this… the story telling of your work never fails to disappoint. :-)
hi Anita, great to see you here on rb :) I didn’t put a vignette on because i just wanted it to feel stark I suppose – empty, barren. I have hardly changed it from the camera – played with curves to get it more contrasty but decided against the vignette as it just didn’t work for this image.
I like how he completely stands out. Almost as if her were cut and pasted here- it looks 3D, which is a sign of good depth. ;) What this image tells me (and what I get from this) is his sense of almost confusion/longing..as if wanting to “fit in” here..but can’t-as if he were in a dream and stunned. I get a real sense that his home was taken away..much like the tribes in the rainforests losing their lands, etc. The title really does say it all. Fine work! (I love a photo that tells a story!)
If I’d known you were visiting Blyth you could have dropped by for a cuppa. I missed meeting you at David Taylor’s exhibition … it was good, wasn’t it. Oops … sorry … great photo :))
Jeff Burns
Beautifully done I love the way this is set up and framed how gorgeous.
Great work Deb
Leslie Patton
Oh i love this! Very touching. Lovely in black and white. Great work girl!
Jo Fedora
Outstanding..the vulnerability of the child with the massive construct appearing to dominate and overpower..this is great work..
Deborah Parkin replied
thanks so much Jo – glad you like it :)
petelangman
skill…. did you ever say that at school… skill!!! this is fab, love it, love it!
Alan Rodmell
I recognise this place…. is it the refinery on Blyth Harbour by any chance? On Cambois side?
Spot on DOF. Brilliant processing – as usual
Deborah Parkin replied
spot on Alan :)
Kaylene B
very nice comp!
Gaurav Dhup
lovely picture!
RichardV
Great work Deb. Has a ‘Post Apocolypse’ look to it.
christiane
Makes a powerful statement
Michael Oubridge
You should have told me you were in Blyth Deb? Could have put the kettle on for you :)
Great work
Deborah Parkin replied
it crossed my mind Michael :)
gladders
Ahhhhh. I see Abe has been to the Dalek factory in readiness for tomorrow nights Dr.Who! Yes I am excited! Just bought a new car AND Dr.Who starts again tomorrow what more does a boy want! Lovely shot Debs….lacks the Goth edge of your other stuff….is this an impending change of direction? I am watching the crappiest movie ever…I have stooped to watching Buffy the Vampire Slayer!
pinkyjain
This is beautiful Deborah
Jen Cannella
What an amizingly beautiful image…perfect!
Michael Oubridge
When did you actually come across to Blyth?
Deborah Parkin
today Michael – it’s part of my college project – so will be going back no doubt :)
StacyLee
I love the message of this image. Incredible work Deb!
Sean Farragher
fantastic capture
Michael Oubridge
I hope your car is still in one piece, the road is, well not really a road now :)
Deborah Parkin replied
not bad thanks – although nearly blown in the sea lol!!
Kristie King
Very Nice!
coffeetea
beauutiful capture.
Sharon Hammond
Great concept Deb
JudyBJ
wonderful shot and expressio
CinB
nice capture
Karin Taylor
great capture…
having tried to take good shots with my own camera
i can really appeciate the skill that is behind what you do :)
micmac
Powerful image ,beautiful.
Mel Brackstone
My goodness, what a thought-provoking image!! Beaut shot, Deb, love the way you’ve framed this!
Dave Miller
not sure this one works as well as your other work, I think (and it’s only my thoughts) that the boy looks too clean & nice to fit into that type of urban area ! – two pictures which don’t quite make a whole. Feel free to say that’s rubbish Deborah
Deborah Parkin replied
Hi Dave – thanks for your comment i really do appreciate your input (honest :)) However, in defence of this image I have to say that the environment is supposed to feel alien to this boy – which it is – he is uncomfortable being there and afraid of it – it is a place on a beach and not the environment one usually associates children playing a beach with – but children do. The other thing is about him being ‘clean and nice’ – i know what you mean in the sense of other ‘documentary’ style photography – only showing kids that are dirty etc playing on council estates etc – well to be honest i didn’t go down that road as i wanted to show a different side. I was bought up on a council estate – single parent etc – no money – shared a room with mum and sister but we were always clean and respectful of other – well mannered etc – council estates, single mums aren’t always about poverty = dirt etc. I am not saying that you are implying this, I am just trying to get across the message of this image. Phew!!! But honestly I do appreciate what you say because at least you have looked and given an honest account of what it says (or doesn’t say) to you and it will make me think the next time i try and do another shot like this – so it helps. Sorry for the essay but i hope others will read this and understand the image :) Thanks again Dave and have a good day.
AnGeLLe
I think it’s well done
Nicole Goggins
love it! love the title, composition, light, his lovely little face and ofcourse the b & w conversion is spot on – as always… great image!
maka1967
Great illustration of the industrialization’s impact on childhood.
Rebecca Ogden
nice shot. makes me want to know the story here. good job!!
zandria
Fantastic shot…definitely evokes conversation. Great treatment.
AndyReeve
So Clever. Despite B/W there is a warmth coming from the girl.
Claire Armistead
Stunning image for Gaia Deborah. A real stand out piece which is beautiful : )
shawhouse
I love the subtle dof. the black is blacker on Abe and he’s so much sharper than the rest of the image he jumps off the screen and seem to be in alien territory, but you made him still appear to be there, not like he’s pasted on, as too often happens with dof. His expression and body language add to the impression. great control, and excellent capture. low key Gaia statement that speaks volumes. this is wonderful! :)
Simon Mears
this is awesome. maybe its the kids hair but it has a 70’s thing to it.. maybe that’s just me but a superb photograph b & w industrial playground.. kind of place footballers used to learn their game and the rest of us used to learn how to steal cars… top notch work
vonne
Love the look = ) I check out your book VERY nice.
Paul Compton
Stunning. Gorgeous composition. Bravo.
missmunchy
totally perfect. I love the post processing, the framing, the look on the childs face…perfect!
Lam Tran
Very stunning shot! Just remind me of where I work with children! well done! Lovely portrait and b/w!
PhotoFox
Love it!
Ken Mucke
Deb…this one is really fantastic….what I love in this image is the innocence of the child and the background of this industril plant that is even fenced off…..”keep out”...the contrast between the 2 worlds is just amazing and I love her expression and you can just image what is running through the childs mind…...and don;t you wonder about the life….I do…..brilliant piece
Graham Dean
Used to a DP leaving me eurphoric., but when I saw this I thought it has a real bite, and you’ve just explained to me why. Love seeing you showcase your versatility as an artist as you do in so many directions. Brilliant picture.
Robert Mrvecka
perfect!
Caroline Gorka
Excellent image ….so impressed with your portraits Deborah !
Ian James
Cool black and white image Deborah and I like your description to go with it. Its interesting to hear the thought that went into making an image.
Deborah Parkin replied
thank you so much Ian – glad you like it :)
Matt Roberts
Nice image.
david malcolmson
We should be thankful that the child’s imagination shields it from the ugliness or squalor of its environment. Not so for the adult who sees it all (if he or she has any sensibility). We see the ugliness and we have to acknowledge the reality of the world that we have brought our children into.A visual metaphor of great power, Deborah.
Louise Cooke
Just read through your thought process on this image Deb and I think you did manage to convey what you set out to. He does look uncomfortable here…like he’s gone exploring like any kid does, but hasn’t found a fairytale. It feels quite tinged with sadness..a hint of disappointment in his distant gaze. A very thought provoking, atmospheric image..great work :)
Deborah Parkin replied
Thanks Louise for your great comment – really appreciate it :)
Deborah Parkin
Thank you everyone for your wonderful comments – really appreciate them – sorry i can’t reply to each and everyone of them :)
Colin Tobin
This is a real thought provoking image, there are so many ways to interpret this.
To me he looks alone, possibly lost, in a place where he shouldn’t have gone in the first place. He is afraid, uncertain and maybe even guilty for wandering somewhere he was told never to visit.
Fantastic work Deborah! :)
soulexperience
really like your style of b&w
Dave Miller
Thanks Deborah for the full reply and taking the time to do it, Having an insight into someone’s work can be very interesting & I enjoyed reading your idea behind the image, that’s great you achieved your desired effect. As you said I was only saying what I saw. It’s good to question things sometimes and I can see you like that. Regards Dave
- --—-—-—-—-—-—-—-——- that’s your name off the Christmas card list …..Deborah Parkin replied
LOL!!! Dave – you are right – i appreciated your honesty – thanks for looking back.
billyboy
Deb, I checked out your picture, read through ALL the comments… actually Dave’s was the most interesting in that he puts this image in context with the ideas that most of us have grown up with, ie that ‘playgrounds’ like this are more associated with scruffier looking kids. As it happens, I think he’s honed in on the essence of your take. The kid looks middle class with clean clothes, clean face and no scars… yet he is captured with a perplexed and destitute attitude in this industrial site on the edge of nowhere. He should be romping through a woods or playing with his dog & frisbie on the other side of the beach that’s got the waves. Seems to me that there’s an increasing danger that the nice playgrounds are getting harder to find by the minute and children like this lad are sadly forced to take what they can get in our increasingly industrialized world. I’m not here to winge about that aspect of our society as I reap the benefits that it provides, and my only child is now grown up and fortunately never had to face what it looks like your boy here is going through. But I do fear for her children’s children. Your imagery makes us think and plants the idea in our heads without us even knowing you’ve done it. That’s the magic of your work and that’s why I think you are so f’ing awesome.
Martin Derksema
Fantastic picture. Yeah, we are all heroes that have to struggle in a tough world. This environment looks so unfriendly and unpersonal and cold. And places like this have such a strong atmosphere of lonelyness. It is as if he asks himself: ‘What to do with this dimension of life?’ The struggle with the uglyness of life … aarrgghh … Well, we have to go on. One foot after the other. Great soulart, Deborah.
Elizabeth Duncan
Sensational image. A piece of brilliance!
roybarry
Fabulous framing and composition. This image really does pose many questions about the modern world and our ability and desire to bring up our young in safe environments.
nodrogart
You never fail to astound me Deb, the focus is on the Boy, but I am drawn to the industrious area behind even though it is not the focal point, excellent!!!
:)
Stuart Chapman
This one’s a little bright for you Deb and I like it.
The depth works particularly well. and the clarity on Abe, down to the details of the creases in his top, together with the shadows shows that. The landscape behind does look very industrial and nothing that I would associated with beach life (other than Dungeness, but I thought that place was a law unto itself!)
Very powerful image. Your images always pack a punch and this seems to be the more powerful for the lightness in it, which sounds contradictory, but the clarity in even the soft background just adds power to the shot.
I don’t get uncomfortable from the shot, just boredom, just feel like, “Can we play on the proper bit of the beach now Mum?”
Paul Tupman
Wow, what a great shot and as always very thought provoking.. kind of makes me think of what the next generation will do with our little land… you could almost look on it as a comment on how industry is being left behind…
Really great work and fantastic tones and contrasts in this… the story telling of your work never fails to disappoint. :-)
funkyfacestudio
Fantastic shot Deborah…...your son has the best head of hair around, he is gorgeous !
George Stylianou
Brilliant shot!! Great stuff!
Jessica Tremp
amazing photograph…beautiful
BlaizerB
Fabulous work. lovely black and white photo. cheers
Rhana Griffin
So… first of all I need to ditto every single word in Billyboys comment.
Second of all I need to give you a big fat ole aussie girl hug.
Third I need to fave this image because he gets me… right here (puts her hand over her heart)
Peter Evans
One hell of a reportage shot…Pulitzer comes to mind.
Really excellent work!!!!!!!!
David Stuart
Wonderfully composed Deborah. You are the master ..um, the mistress..hmm, yes mistress works for me :O)
Paul Vanzella
great shot Deb – love the way the child’s emotion matches the landscape… Tones are so perfect!
ADMarshall
nice lament
Antanas
great work, well done
Treecreeper
A very powerful image. I am filled with sadness.
Himiona Grace
lovely thoughtful moment captured
Anita Charlton...
Deb, you already know i love the shot but I am curious as to why you haven’t vignetted the top edge in this image?
Deborah Parkin replied
hi Anita, great to see you here on rb :)
I didn’t put a vignette on because i just wanted it to feel stark I suppose – empty, barren. I have hardly changed it from the camera – played with curves to get it more contrasty but decided against the vignette as it just didn’t work for this image.
Thanks for your comment :)
Ash rebeltherace
great capture
my dad works in a place just like this
the contrast is spectacular
Mark Gardner
superb, wonderful composition and as usual the image portrays a story, brilliant
Birgitta
I like how he completely stands out. Almost as if her were cut and pasted here-
it looks 3D, which is a sign of good depth. ;) What this image tells me (and what I get from
this) is his sense of almost confusion/longing..as if wanting to “fit in” here..but can’t-as if
he were in a dream and stunned. I get a real sense that his home was taken away..much like
the tribes in the rainforests losing their lands, etc. The title really does say it all. Fine work!
(I love a photo that tells a story!)
Talya Chalef
beautiful work. it feels like the landscape is reflecting how the little boy is feeling – lost.
Mindy McGregor
Your work is brilliant!
Jean M. Laffitau
Absolutly fantastic and intense bw! WOW!
jase8812
Great shot!
born2serve
I love seeing the mood you’ve captured.
BLYTHART
If I’d known you were visiting Blyth you could have dropped by for a cuppa. I missed meeting you at David Taylor’s exhibition … it was good, wasn’t it. Oops … sorry … great photo :))
Deborah Parkin replied
Thanks so much for the comment:)
Sorry I missed you at David’s exhibition, it would have been lovely to meet you – unfortunately I couldn’t stay long.
held
really great concept and coloring… fav definitely