Secret Place
This is a collaboration between myself and Flyboy for WitheringMoon’s competition on Secret Places
I just wanted say thank you to FlyBoy for such inspirational piece of writing – he really has got into the mind of a child and added a whole new dimension to this image.
Secret Place
My head was a castle
with more than a thousand rooms.
One for cat,
one for goldfish
one for teddy bear.
I dreamt of wings and talked with fairies,
and filled my chambers with the incense
of defenceless innocence.
But, like vipers,
hiding in a fresh green field,
there were the others too.
Frosted shadows,
growling, grinning,
firing burning arrows of contempt,
for which no bear could be my shield.
When I got hurt
I went downstairs,
where, in the cellar,
light was never seen.
There, in a dungeon,
was my secret place, where
I locked away the weight of a burden
my little feet just could not bear.
Since then I saw the sun rise
fourteen thousand times, or more.
I bought new lamps,
I found new friends,
and, in the evening,
lit a fire.
But, when the wind starts howling,
and the moon projects a shadow play
of fingers piercing through the wall,
I notice something deep beneath.
Like stumbling feet,
a desperate voice
crying loud to be released?
My hands are tied,
I must endure.
Oh, long ago,
on a dark day,
when things got worse than ever,
I stashed my burden,
locked the door,
and, driven by my burning fear,
I threw away the key,
forever.

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Mike Emmett
Woah! What a great image! It works with or without the writing, and together they tell a great story!!!
gordontant
Very Erie looking Deb, I like it a lot
Naomi Frost
WOW ....Absolutely stunning Deborah. I said all of that out loud to my computer too.
Wonderful story aswell Flyboy.
Fantastic work you guys – you’ll be hard to beat.
Trish Cooper
Deb: what an amazing image…so haunting…it just draws you in…i love it in black and white!!!
what a collaboration… the picture and words go hand in hand…..I simply love it. Trish
Douzy
Great job Deborah, one of my favourite of yours so far. This one should win!!
Karen Cougan
ooo what a little trip he is on….......wonderful Deb
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SpaceCadet34
Excellent…image and words!!
Angela Stewart
Wow, congrats to both of you on this sensational work!!!
Deri Dority
Awesome image!!!!!
Antanas
Great work again…
cdwork
Impressive work all round
gladders
Lovely shot again Deb. You always seem to get a great nitty gritty image. I always love the treatment you give your pics. You will have to give me a lesson!
DawsonImages
moody and ominous, a nice Halloween card image
Martin Mullen
Great image Deborah.
Conveys the theme and feeling so well
Halcyon007
Congrats to you both, both a haunting image and excellent words.
Good luck in the comp
Andrew Bosman
Exceptional work you two!
poppykitten
An excellent piece of work between you and Flyboy. Great contrast and texture.
lightsmith
tremendous use of stark bw. Creates such an eeirie feel too. The words are terrific too – flyboy. A great and successful collaberation.
shanghaiwu
this is a brilliant team effort
shawhouse
I love it! wonderful treatment. the doors _feel_rough-hewn and heavy. great angle – emphasizes the massive entrance. very dramatic and spooky image. fine collaboration.
Martin Derksema
Your picture is so good, Deborah. I was playing with the theme in my head and then you send this and – bang! – magic started. I think shawhouse made a great and to-the-point analisys of your image, which I totally agree with. Abe looks so vulnarable but also like a hero doing what he has to do, facing this darkness in front of him. The door is massive and the angle is perfect. The black and white magic makes the picture to an exciting mind trip. Thanks for the joy of doing this together.
booboo
The steps leading up into the darkness, the big heavy wooden door left ajar with its stone pillars either side all looks a little foreboding as the subject walks gingerly up to the steps. A very emotive image Deborah, beautifully worked. Well done
Catalin Soare
Exquisite!
Deborah Parkin
thank you all for such wonderful comments – really appreciate them all:)
velveteagle
This works very well Deborah…
Deborah Bowness
Wow, this will behard to beat for sure!! The image conveys the message on it’s own, but when teamed with the writing, it really is something special, well done Deborah and Flyboy!
Rhana Griffin
Smashing work! This is so good, I think I may even cry a little.
Mugsy
Nice one Deb!
Paul Tupman
Wow! What a collaboration! Both pieces are stand alone on their own merits, but go together so well.. the image portraying the defencless innocence of the child and secret place within the dungeon perfectly. Both darkness of the image and burdens in the writing go hand in hand seamlessly.. well done both!
Mel Brackstone
What a fabulous image, Deborah!! Good luck with the comp!
Helene Kippert
Awesome shot Deb and Martin’s writing complements it perfectly!
StacyLee
Beautiful work Deb! This is great!! Love the lighting :)
Arthur Chambers
This really set’s the seen for a secret place-well done.
Graham Dean
Another great picture Deb, the glare is as eerie as the dark. The perspective is fantastic.
Bruce Halliburton
Well done, Deb and Flyboy – Superb!
dairygirl
this is superb, love it
Lisa Defazio
Scary image Deb and the writing too, loved the last two lines.
Sean Farragher
awesome work both of you
micmac
Cool .deep atmosphere..love it.
SylviaHardy
Brilliant image Deborah and exellent work. Congratulations too! You’ve made the home page, well done to both you and flyboy!
Dan Cahill
Wonderful work Deborah and Flyboy. Love the light. Congrats on it being featured on the front page.
Basia McAuley
Love the comp, treatment & how awesome and ageless the door is compared to the boys youth. Brilliant.
Julie Langford
Lovely shot Daborah – great mono work as usual, and such a mystical atmosphere to this. Lovely words to go with it too. a real gem.
mawaho
Lots of emotion here. A wonderful picture accompanied by stirring words. Well done to you both!
sword
You take some wonderful shots,this is another one that i like very much
Kevin Kroeker
WOW!!! This is extraordinary!! You have really envoked the imagination with this one!!! Beautiful capture…. I am speechless!!!!
Jing3011
Love the picture and the writing. What a wonderful combo!
marieancolie
One of your very very best. And what a collaboration ! A winner for sure.
My best compliments
Kimberly Adams
Very nice Deborah.
Ada Panich
Beautiful capture and b/w!
Antoine Dagobert
wow looks like i missed the fireworks on this!ABSOLUTELY TOP OF THE LINE Collaboration work!
Congrats to both of you!
Jef Harris
This is just wonderful. And the feeling of storytelling is so powerful.
Manda02
awesome, makes me want to enter the darkness to see whats in there. The written piece . once started just had to keep going
Jeff Burns
incredible work from you two. Awesome job!
Deborah Parkin
thanks everyone for your lovely comments – you are great source of encouragement :)
Torfinn Johann...
Wonderful as usual Deb. Your b/w are fantastic.
Nicholas Averre
Wow.. this is really amazing work from the pair of you. I’m rather speachless!! perfect collaboration.
studiofascino
nice composition, well done again!
ferndesign
ooo this is awesome i love it
Michael Oubridge
Beautiful Debs, :)
Emma Anderson
Brilliant work both!
amberafternoon
WOW! This really draws the viewer in! I love it!
MaryO
A perfect match in image and words.
Congrats for decorating the homepage, a well deserved place.
missalyshachri...
incredible:)
its fantastic!
Salvatore Testa
Excellent image!
I hate to say I haven’t read the story yet. I prefer to make up my own idea of what is going on in the picture for now. I love it though, an old door, a few stairs… the curiosity of a young mind. I’ve bookmarked this, so I’ll be sure to come back and read your story soon.
memory
Fascinating image, intriguing writing.
Claire McAdams
Awesome black and white, this has a lot of wow factor due to how high key it is. GREAT textures too
wellman
love the high contrast chromed effect – magnificent stuff
Kitsmumma
Abe looks like he’s been there before, marching in so confidently. This is a wonderful shot Deb, could look at it for ages.
Louise Cooke
Awesome Deb and Flyboy…love the combination of words and image…could see you two doing a book together. Your perspective of this is perfect..it enhances the enormity of the doorway and the feeling of mystery – beautiful!
rock
An outstanding meticulous shot. 10/10 to you and flyboy
cheers
R
Eyal Nahmias
I think you executed it brilliantlyy. The text and image are perfect together. Just the image itself makes people connect with their own experiences.
Martie Venter
Wow – this is so rich in symbolism and significance, such a hauntingly beautiful image – amazing writing, too!
WitheringMoon
Incredible Deb!
Lucindawind
excellent !
Tony Moore
I’ve been busy lately and missed this, similar concept to one of your earlier shots, but certainly worth revisiting, it’s worked a treat, love the tones and the sense of adventure.
FAVED
Christophe Testi
WOW! Stunning B&W shot
andrewmay
lovely starkest in this 1
RichardV
This image makes me want to be a kid again. The old wooden door, the stone steps, and the dark hallway. What an adventure to be had. My imagination is running riot. Great shot.
Matt Hurrell
I love the style of your images Deborah and in particular this one. It has that sense of expectation that you have as a child, where Lions, Witches and Wardrobes still might exist! Great work!
Birgitta
Oh wow.
You really know how to suck the viewer right in with your tones, Deb!!
The darkness looming ahead is the main focal point. That, and the top
of the archway. I want to say: “No! Don’t go in there!” heh..
Your work is moving & strong..and always thought provoking!
I really like it. (big fan!)
Michael Lane
Amazing texture and contrast
Nicolas Hall
Beautiful capture of the wonder and innocence of the child and the place we are all reaching back for in our lives. . .never lost. . . just put to sleep for awhile sometimes. Your work brings that alive again. . . lovely shot.
Ralph Olsson
Trepidation plus!!!Awesome work:)
woof
love it! great work!