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spontaneous combustion or a little night music

Morning beckoned as they lay too wonderfully sated in loves embrace to move from the large silk sheeted bed. They had met at seven the previous evening and though a table for two was arranged with candle light, champagne, soft music they had simply looked into each other’s eyes and slipped silently from the foyer into the empty lift. No words were spoken as they gained the privacy of the bedroom where slowly and deftly he had disrobed her
“Seven am.” Garth said switching off the mobile telephone and placeing it on the bedside table. The remark caused Marie to snuggle closer.
“Twelve hours; twelve glorious hours. Have we slept long?”
“I really could not say my dear. I have not looked before to see and my reason now was to ascertain if the breakfast room will be open; our evening repast was one that curbed a different appetite.”

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both title and story are enigmas.. leaving much to the imagination…and questions too… first question being …‘are they married?’ what do you think?

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love, embrace, questions, breakfast, married, snuggle, appetite, sated

Comments

  • bearwings
    bearwingsover 4 years ago

    no, no …are they married wasn’t an issue, thinking have they known each other long…..
    five minutes or fifty years could change the outcome a little.

  • it was from a longer piece that – i hope – discreetly describes what happens in the bedroom…
    i do think leaving a lot to the imagination is fun

    – aaeiinnn

  • autumnwind
    autumnwindover 4 years ago

    oh wow, my imagination is going all over the place. hmm…maybe they just got married, maybe they just fell in love, maybe they have loved for a long time and are not able to often get together. Just such an awesome little write you have here!!! : )) xoxoxo

  • thank you so very much shar
    yours was the reaction i was wanting
    xx annie

    – aaeiinnn

  • JaneSolomon
    JaneSolomonover 4 years ago

    lots of maybes here annie…..i’d say newly married.xx

  • i would not expect newly weds to ‘meet at 7pm’ x

    – aaeiinnn

  • JaneSolomon
    JaneSolomonover 4 years ago

    i’ve changed my mind…..i think definitely lovers who don’t see eachother often. x

  • what about long married and wanting to spice up their relationship?
    thanks jane for comments

    – aaeiinnn

  • Cathryn Swanson
    Cathryn Swansonover 4 years ago

    I’m going for married with children and they have a glorious weekend to re-invest :)

  • must admit to many years ago] suggesting a ‘laison’ with my husband to do just that…lacking a romantic nature he turned me down [boo hoo]

    – aaeiinnn

  • Solar Zorra
    Solar Zorraover 4 years ago

    I think that they just met that morning and the chemistry was so strong that they made plans for a casual dinner at seven…..then….wa la……. spontaneous combustion! Best sex ever! :) Solar

  • solar in the circles near my home where i read /perform my poetry, i have a ‘reputation ’ but even i would not be so giddy as to have them meet the same day…
    thanks for the comment ..it is fun ’supposeing’

    – aaeiinnn

  • Tracey    lee Stokes
    Tracey lee ...over 4 years ago

    Uh oh.Are they married yet not to each other?Been lovers for years…?
    It does make you think.A great read.Though i hope they are not comitted to others.I still wont judge them.Happiness is happiness. (o:

  • thank you for your input here
    i learned a long time ago that i should not judge others by my own code of conduct

    – aaeiinnn

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