The pain has stolen your glow
The remedy has stolen your soul
The eyes once held hallowed
Now stare back hollowed
pain remedy eyes soul
Short but powerful piece. Very effective. xxoo
First thing I’ve written in weeks. Thanks!
I’m with Rikki…short, powerful and very emotive…can I say kick-arse piece!
Thanks for the kick-arse comment! I need it right now!
I love your use of words in this emotive, heart wrenching poem. Beautiful work.
Knew this one would strike a chord with you! Thanks!
heart-breaking and emotive…beautifully written…
Thanks Boo, fear not…hearts do mend!
Now that IS the definition of pain.
Let’s see if there is any handy redemption nearby!
There is always redemption!!!
Wow, this is very good. Pain, in so few of words, doesn’t make it any less painful. Less is more, and especially with this piece.
You really put your finger on it! Thank you so very much!
Tricky word play done so well.
And you have read into it well! Thanks.
How awesome you are for making me feel so awesome! Thanks!
Oh dear, does this mean you know me TOO well? LOL!
Can friends actually know each other TOO well?!?
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