She's waking up!

She’s waking up.
Ever so slowly.

Around her.
Her world is grey.

A little chilly.
A little Bleak.

But safe.
Familiar.

She’s waking up.
Ever so slowly.

She longs.
For Color.

A little warmth.
Fullfillment.

It’s there.
Beyond that door.

She’s waking up.
Ever so slowly.


8upchef

She's waking up! by

Inspired by a wonderful photographic work, by the same name!

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cold, hope, unsure, waking

Comments

  • Shoaib .
    Shoaib .about 2 years ago

    beautiful

  • Thank you!

    – 8upchef

  • Soaps
    Soapsabout 2 years ago

    I like that, how nice, I too long for colour and I know I am waking up ever so slowly. If I may claim these feelings as my own that it. Thank you. Clever, clear words.

  • Thanks for such kind words!

    – 8upchef

  • Matthew Robert
    Matthew Robertabout 2 years ago

    So precious and beautiful.
    Well done
    MIDNIGHT RAMBLER FEATURE

  • Thanks for such a wonderful recognition!

    – 8upchef

  • Alexis Snider
    Alexis Sniderabout 2 years ago

    Makes me think of the precursor to ‘just another day’ by Sir Paul McCartney. Very relative and very well expressed.

  • I’m glad it brings good things to mind for you!

    – 8upchef

  • Arcadia Tempest
    Arcadia Tempestabout 2 years ago

    Just snuggles so nicely right in…..really enjoyed the fuller meaning of this… :O)

  • Thank you for taking the time to really read into this piece, that means alot to me!

    – 8upchef

  • sandra .
    sandra .about 2 years ago

    It reminds me of another Beatles number… “she’s leaving home, bye bye”, ‘home’ , maybe being the grey…..
    I really enjoyed this …
    sandra

  • I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!

    – 8upchef

  • rubyjo
    rubyjoabout 2 years ago

    ahhh lovely, actually reminds me of spring, and the earth waking up

  • 8upchef
    8upchefabout 2 years ago

    What a wonderful take on this! Thank you!

  • helene ruiz
    helene ruizabout 2 years ago

    very nice!

  • Thank you!

    – 8upchef

  • SummerDawnn
    SummerDawnnabout 2 years ago

    I am so glad i inspired you to write this. :)

  • So am I. You have many wonderful pieces. Hope to see more from you!

    – 8upchef