She’s waking up.
Ever so slowly.
Around her.
Her world is grey.
A little chilly.
A little Bleak.
But safe.
Familiar.
She’s waking up.
Ever so slowly.
She longs.
For Color.
A little warmth.
Fullfillment.
It’s there.
Beyond that door.
She’s waking up.
Ever so slowly.
Comments
beautiful
Thank you!
– 8upchef
I like that, how nice, I too long for colour and I know I am waking up ever so slowly. If I may claim these feelings as my own that it. Thank you. Clever, clear words.
Thanks for such kind words!
– 8upchef
So precious and beautiful.
Well done
MIDNIGHT RAMBLER FEATURE
Thanks for such a wonderful recognition!
– 8upchef
Makes me think of the precursor to ‘just another day’ by Sir Paul McCartney. Very relative and very well expressed.
I’m glad it brings good things to mind for you!
– 8upchef
Just snuggles so nicely right in…..really enjoyed the fuller meaning of this… :O)
Thank you for taking the time to really read into this piece, that means alot to me!
– 8upchef
It reminds me of another Beatles number… “she’s leaving home, bye bye”, ‘home’ , maybe being the grey…..
I really enjoyed this …
sandra
I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!
– 8upchef
ahhh lovely, actually reminds me of spring, and the earth waking up
What a wonderful take on this! Thank you!
very nice!
Thank you!
– 8upchef
I am so glad i inspired you to write this. :)
So am I. You have many wonderful pieces. Hope to see more from you!
– 8upchef