The memories came flooding back.
Like the daylight through the front door.
Memories of restless Sunday mornings.
Excused to the foyer so I wouldn’t disrupt mass.
That huge, ominous, daunting door.
Contrasting itself with an ornate beauty.
My mind convinced that it weighed a ton.
The relief I felt when it swung so freely.
Standing there with the cool church air to my back.
The warm Spring sunshine beckoning me.
The perfume of the Daffodils rushes in.
A rustling of immature leaves on the breeze.
The excited screams from the playground.
Laughter and a call of “Marco”.
Oh how I wanted to be out there with them.
Now as an adult I may want it even more.
Now that the memories came flooding back.
Like the daylight through the front door.
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This is terrific writing my friend.
Thanks, Means alot coming from you. Make you a deal, you keep the great writes coming, and I’ll try to do the same!
– 8upchef
Deal.
That’s a great deal :) I loved the feeling of adventure in this piece… the adventure is just beginning! Superb writing, thanks for sharing :)
You’re welcome, and Thank You!
Beautiful, wistful poem. Loved it!
a real delight. very sensitive.