I close my eyes and your beauty lights the darkness. My senses reel as you begin to totally and completely fill me. I can sense your presence, even though I am alone. With every breath I draw you in. Deeper and deeper. I inhale your fragrance. Your scent fills the air around me.
I lay quietly down and feel the tensions ease slowly away. Somehow you are all around me, and I cannot resist. Even though my eyes remain closed, I can see your face. I can see the slope of your bare shoulder and the curve of your hips. Every detail of you is as clear as a sunlit day. My mind races as you invade my every fiber. I can feel you in me. I can feel you with me. I can really feel you!
I hear your voice. . . just a whisper. The wind? My own imaginings? I am no longer sure. I want to open my eyes but I dare not, less the moment be spoiled. You are here, and yet you are not. Your presence has completely and totally enveloped me. I turn my head and I can feel your hair fall across my face. I place my fingertips on my lips and I kiss you. The look that I see in your eyes and the feelings inside urge me on, and my fingers become yours as my hands move slowly down my body, and you touch me.
deliriousgirl
OK, cold shower for me now!
jen
Michael J replied
I’m glad you liked it.
Although I don’t have your flair for descriptive writing, you inspired me to show some of the things that no one else has ever seen.
deliriousgirl
I think that’s what’s it’s basically all about, reaching inside to find an authenticity of self and being able to bring it out in your art form. It’s the element that makes us all unique and it’s a damned crying shame that so many folks never express theirs. Another of my seemingly endless pet peeves.
OK, getting off my soapbox now.
It is good and solid writing with deep meaning. You should keep it up.
jen
lianne
well done Michael – hopefully that deep a “connection” comes to everyone at some time in their lives. Aptly titled too, I might add.
Michael J replied
Thank you Lianne.
I have been somewhat nervous about posting any of my “creative” writing here. Your comment encourages me.