Rapture

Oh devilish disciple
And Jezebel…
You and I…
Watch me reign
To make you prevail
As it is my season

See my skin glow
As I entice you
With burning eyes
In the pale blue light
Of the heathen
Hazy full moon

Let us sinfully dance
In exaltation of ardour
Offer me your rage
Carve my inner core
Sculpt my femininity
Own my sacred caverns

Oh devilish god
And Mary Magdalene…
You and I…
Then tell the crowd
Who is without sin among them
To first cast a stone on me

(Lilith)


-Lilith-

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  • Satyriasis73
    Satyriasis73over 2 years ago

    definitely great . . . the part beginning with …. sinfully dance… whoa… great great great.. sacred caverns… very nice

  • Thanks a lot Satyriasis! I know satyrs usually like sinful dances. :-)

    – -Lilith-

  • charliethetramp
    charliethetrampover 2 years ago

    i suppose a rapturous applause is in order
    you express yourself so well… another passionate episode
    in a dialogue of desire..your writing is exceptional at times

  • Many thanks Charlie. Well, actually I am a writer, even more than a photographer! It’s a challenge to do it in another language than my own… but I’m learning! :-)

    – -Lilith-

  • lupa
    lupaover 2 years ago

    Vivid images…this is fantastic, Lilith..give me heathen hazy full moons to howl and dance under..always!
    )0(
    xxx

  • I know! :-) thanks a lot Lupa! )o(

    – -Lilith-

  • Iris  R
    Iris Rover 2 years ago

    Wow. I love especially the last lines. Who is without sin? Oh, but you do it purposely. lol Nice
    Iris

  • Ha ha…. Oh my! Perhaps I’ll get punished now!
    Thanks Happyfeet! :-)

    – -Lilith-

  • Reynaldo
    Reynaldoover 2 years ago

    very well written

  • Thank you Reynaldo!

    – -Lilith-

  • raymondoantonio
    raymondoantonioover 2 years ago

    STICK IT TO THE HYPOCRITES LILITH!!! X

  • Ha ha…! I will. Thank you signore Raymondo!

    – -Lilith-

  • bev langby
    bev langbyover 2 years ago

    just brilliant xx

  • Wow, thank you Bev!

    – -Lilith-

  • Leon A.  Walker
    Leon A. Walkerover 2 years ago

    You can really go deep sometimes Ms. Lilith!!! I am amazed at your creative mind!!!

  • Thank you Leon, you are so kind.

    – -Lilith-

  • MarkezzAckui ...
    MarkezzAckui ...over 2 years ago

    nice….really, really nice.

  • Many thanks MarkezzAckui! I appreciate it.

    – -Lilith-

  • Lisa  Jewell
    Lisa Jewellover 2 years ago

    I adore the feminine power you’ve held beautifully within this stunning piece.

  • I feel honored Lisa, thank you!

    – -Lilith-