I, ignorant
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Is sequestered from everything
Surrounded by people
Being alone
Not knowing the faces
Not speaking the languages
Not recognizing the goals
I, ignorant
Wandering in incomprehencibility
Afraid to be lost
Irretrievable
On my beautiful
But indivisible island
(Lilith)
charliethetramp
ignore the i and its ok to rant?
what a wonderfull thoughtfull piece of writing lilith
your awareness has an inspiration all of its own
and ignorance is a thing i don`t believe you possess
but sometimes such awareness can feel isolating
but hopefully its only a transitory experience
its a very observational poem
which i think a lot of us can relate too.
-Lilith- replied
“but sometimes such awareness can feel isolating”
Leon Walker
I think this is a particularly good piece of writing. It is thought provoking and you invite readers to consider their point of view by using yours. Excellent Pretty One!!!
-Lilith- replied
Many thanks! It really means a lot YOU say that!
PJ Ryan
I really enjoyed the depth of this piece, that opening paragraph is so deeply profound .. beautiful.
-Lilith- replied
Thanks a lot PJ!
Nascha
Great piece Lilith….much said here between the lines too. xxx
-Lilith- replied
Wow, thanks Jane! I’m glad you SEE! :-)
marieangel
beautiful flow…so enjoyed
linaji
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Cassidy JK (Ra...
Stunning write.
ambient-1
Beautiful!
tracyxkeema
great writing, congrats on the feature x
Mark Ramstead
I might suggest we are happier finding our way than staying where we can be found… : )