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! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Around the Styles, All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Avant-Garde, Beige is death!, Blue Room, Core [C.O.R.E], Dark artists, dark art, Feminine Intent (LIMIT TWO IMAGES PER DAY), Fine Art of the Female Form, Freedom In Words & Art, Gateways, Hombres Fatal, Imperfectly, Live, Love, Dream: , Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Pulp Noir, Self as Other, Something To Say, THE DIVINE FEMININE, The Fine Art of Fetish & Erotica., The Healing Journey, The Sensual Word, THE SISTERHOOD and The true beautyI don’t want to leave this night of fire
Or take his used glass to the kitchen
Or throw away his empty cigarette box
I don’t want to open the windows
And let the air that he used escape
Or give back his breath to the sky
I don’t want to wash his scent from my hands
Or shower his touch from my skin
Or rinse his bittersweet taste from my tongue
I don’t want to take my make up off
Or kick off these impossible shoes
Or free myself from garters and lace
I don’t want any soothing lotion
To softly rub the burning marks
His raging passion left on my skin
I don’t want to sleep away his love’s commands
That still bindingly echo in my ears
Or dream away the boundaries we broke
I’m staying here, motionless on the couch
To remain in this cocoon of his recent presence
And make this night solidify in time forever
(Lilith)
valzart
WoW! this is beautiful poetry sweetheART ;} happy hippy hugglez
raymondoantonio
BRILLIANT LILITH!! POWERFUL! YOU CREATE WITH WORDS AS WELL AS YOU DO WITH THE CAMERA!! BRAVO!! X
Solomon Walker
so kool, so wonderful, tremendous piece!
Nascha
Utterly beautiful Lillith!! xxx
Leon Walker
This is absolutely fabulous work!!! Both the vision and the presentation are magnificent!!!
AnGeLLe
Oh Lilith, This is awesome!
Brings to mind bubbler Patricia Anne McCarty’s “Dirty Boy”
lupa
The aftermath…or afterglow. Beautiful :))
walela
Absolutely wonderful!!
TheWanderingBoo
incredibly beautiful and heartfelt
Isa Rodriguez
-Lilith- replied
Thank you Isa! What a surprise! I’m happy with it! :-)
chugginrail
this is excellent ….well written
lawrie .
I’ll let you in on a secret….i still have her cigerette stubs with lipstick marks…...................x
-Lilith- replied
Ha ha… I know… I have such little “stupid” things too… :-)
autumnwind
oh wow. outrageous write. I wouldn’t move either. : )) love, shar xoxo
-Lilith- replied
Thank so much Shar!
May65
Wonderful writing!
Coronus
deeply touching. very intense.
Selkie
The validation of Imperfection...
rubyjo
lilith, this rocks
jacqleen
wow….........THIS is HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT….........! wow!
Anne McGinn
Ah, the bliss of the afterglow… glad you are enjoying yourself xoxo
Mark Peterson
Perfect! wonderfully expressed hun…
Mark Ramstead 29 days ago
I can see here that what you feel strongly is something you do not want to just slowly fade away. Has that been a problem? Do you not remember the times that are unforgettable?