Master
Let me give you a look
Into the dazzling abyss
Of my longing soul
Where love is at its purest
And where you see me change
Into the essence of who I truly am
If you take me to the sweet shores
Across the bitter waters
Of your raging River Styx
Like Charon steered his boat
I’ll take every burning wave
On the rhythm of your sharp-edged will
Let me give you a look
Through my ecstatic eyes and senses
And tell you that every pain you cause me
Contains a tenfold of tenderness to me
And every resistance, every boundary you break
Is a milestone of my proven love and pleasure
In the storm of your force
I find my ultimate destiny
When I breathe your Master’s laws
And drink your persistent desires
While I willingly climb your powerful tower
To worship your every masculine wish
Let me give you a look
Into my shivering fulfilment
When you, along with my hands and feet
Simultaneously tie the core of my being
You control me to the limit and beyond
While you fully fill your Fallen Angel
Compel me
To be obliged
When you wish
To own me
Make
Me
Obey
YOU
(Lilith)
Comments
What a great poem of deep devotion and true love! Just amazing!
Danke sehr sehr sehr, Vivian!
– -Lilith-
WoW! wondrous wordz sweetheART sensual yet maidenly lol! ;} happy hippy hugglez
Thank you sweet lady!
– -Lilith-
mmmm……..very emotive, powerful, a force of words…….
Another string to the bow that is Lilith…….
Impressed……and want more!!
Thank you David! I am doing my Dutch best… :-)
– -Lilith-
You have a marvelous talent for expression both with your visuals and words. This is a gripping piece of writing and it has your unique and special seal Lilith… Fantastic Work Lady!!!
Thank you so much Leon! I like that “special seal” part.
Sealed with some Lilith…. :-)
– -Lilith-
how many little deaths does one need
to come into being
great bit of sensual writting tho
revealing the submissive roleplay
that is sometimes needed
to reach an ultimate climax?
with a hint of humour maybe
It’s not a roleplay. It just IS.
Roleplay’s are so shallow and easy.
Humour is somthing else…
This is love.
– -Lilith-
Oh wow. You have left me breathless, yet again.
Thank you!
– -Lilith-
well thats put me in my place then hasn`t it
if it is ,it must be
thanks for the correction
roleplay is easy shallow and unreal
i`ll remember that for future referance tar
Well, at least the roleplays I know are….
But I might have missed out on something?
:-)
– -Lilith-
Thanks Ushna! I’m really happy with this!!!
– -Lilith-
ooooooo. love it. A deep passion spills out into the world for all to see.:))
I feel your soul in these words like an oath Lilith. Man you burnt me with them, branded me with their familiarity, yet you are the slave. Fantastic. I love it.
Thank you very much. Means a lot!
– -Lilith-