THIS
And then
I have silent words
That you read
That I write
To not vanish
To exist
With what I feel
With who I am
Deep, deeper, deepest
What needs to be secure
What now is still lonely
I give you this
Finally
When I painfully stand before you
I give you this.
(Lilith)
Comments
This is soooooooooooooooooooo beautiful, touching, sensitive, so very well done, Lilith!!!! Instant fav!!!
Thanks for the wonderful comment Klaus!
– -Lilith-
to exist and vanish in a blink of an eye
what a wonderfull gift
for any entity to recieve
Thanks! Makes me think of “how fragile we are…”
– -Lilith-
It is all I ever wanted.
It is?
Thank you Mark! :-)
– -Lilith-
sorry about my first comment i was in poetic mode
as english is not your first language its incredible, how well you use it
you can explore and express topics of semantics and philosophy with ease
your mind is just as agile as your imagination is
yout creative prowess never ceases to amaze me
not much more i can say really
Wow, thank you! I appreciate your comments a lot.
Now you make me blush…
– -Lilith-
Beautiful writing……..
Congrats…..featured work
Wow! Thanks again Pete! :-)
– -Lilith-
Nice minimalist etching of the words, with the energy building just beneath the surface. Very effective.
Thank you so much Linaji! xxx
– -Lilith-
Lovely Lilith. xx
Thank you Astoreth! Means a lot…
– -Lilith-
I’m hearing you…love your word craft :)
Again, I am not going to vanish. I might get taken away, but I will find my way back.
Yeah!
– -Lilith-