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Painters In Modern Times

New Shit. "The Pearl Necklace."

Michael Scalf Michael Scalf 11 posts

I did this in a few hours.
It’s my most recent painting.
I like this one alot.
Please, if you have the time
give an actual critique.
ya know…lemme know what you think.
Thanks alot, mikes. :)

Susan van Zyl Susan van Zyl 112 posts

I like it, Mike
If it were mine, I would make her lips a bit more red, and have some indication in the hair of highlights or use the green, blue and yellow to make some strands of hair so that the hair is not just a black spot
By making the lips a tad more red, you mirror the red already used in the background and by using the green, yellow and blue as highlights or hair strands, you give it a more realistic feel to it.

But remember, art is not always exact, what is good for me, is not good for you. I had a look at your art and I like your style.
Blessings
Susan

Evie3 Evie3 9 posts

Totally agree with Susan. It’s almost there Mike, but that large area of black in the middle is taking away from her face. A few highlighted strands should do the trick and seeing as the title is ‘The Pearl Necklace’, maybe whiten up those pearls a notch to make them stand out more. Other than that, I love the perspective you’re using – really makes it interesting to view.

Rgds,

Evie :)