T-shirt critique

Hey all, this is my newest design. It’s actually my second design at all. I’m still beginner so don’t be so hard on me :D
Only thing I’m not sure about is the fog. Maybe I should made it a little bit lighter, or maybe stronger….

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sorry for my horrible English :)

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please anybody, anything? :)

I feel it needs to loose the line to the right side of the seat as it appears unbalanced to me.
Regarding the fog I don’t think you need it under the line and it also needs to be evenly blended as at the moment it appears like it is in stripe… personally I think it would be better without any fog and just have the halo around the light.

I like the fog but agree it would look better evened out and only on the top…...it makes it work for me

This is a nice design. I agree that it is a little unbalanced but apart from that works for me

I’d say remove the fog, mainly because I don’t think it’s going to reproduce well in print. Especially if it’s a transparent gradient.

Great design. I really like it. I also agree that fog looks too linear. Try to make it a bit more inconsistent .

thank you all very much for your comments, ill try to play with it today
i know fog looks linear, but i thought that’s the thing, that makes it interesting…