"Spotlight- Alien Eyes" T-shirt critique

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Sarah Donoghue Sarah Donoghue 107 posts

Please critique. Do you like? Do you think the eyes need further defining? What about positioning on the shirt? Would you wear this or know somwone who would?
Thanks for looking. Have a great day.
Spotlight: Alien Eyes

 
Erin Jay Erin Jay 14 posts

The positioning is good, but the eyes definitely need to be more defined; if I have trouble making it out in the largest pic, it will be totally obscured on the actual shirt. Maybe also positioning the eyes at a slight V? It seems like the whole thing would be more cohesive if they were at a slight angle.

 
Sarah Donoghue Sarah Donoghue 107 posts

how about this?

 
Erin Jay Erin Jay 14 posts

Much better! :)

 
Sarah Donoghue Sarah Donoghue 107 posts

Thanks for your advise, Erin.