T Shirts for Critique

I’d really like some feedback on these, since this is my first time turning some of my art into t-shirt designs.

And this one is just silly, but I wanna see if other people like the joke.

I think the middle one is really nice. The colours look great on the black and the placement’s interesting. The first one you lose the detail in the preview so it’s a bit harder to appreciate at first. It’s still interesting though. It looks like a broach. I’d change the preview on that one so that it shows the girlie fitted tee.. would look more appropriate. The last one’s clever. Would be too much text to read on an actual tee but that doesn’t matter on here. And of course it doesn’t matter if it’s just for friends to read.. personally it would annoy me if I couldn’t read a strangers shirt.. just curiousity. : P

See, that’s the thing—I have shirts that say a lot more on them, and I have people actually stop me so they can read the whole shirt.

Gonna take your advice on the preview for the first one. Thanks!

Haha, yeah? I’ll have to do that then.

I like all three of them!! Nice job!

The first two are really lovely, pleasing to my eye! The third is clever and witty…go for it! :)

the first may look better bigger or spred out more,distorted even,
and the second is ooolala smashing.