Please comment or critique

I am on a steep learning curve here and would be grateful for comment or critique

my writing

Anything particular you want feedback on?

Hm, I would help you, but I didn’t realise it was poetry. Short stories I can do, bu poetry is just not my thing.
Although I did read The Curse and I know exactly how that feels as I do night shifts XD

I am also just starting to write; I’m barely through grade 5 and still just a baby in literature. Would anyone please critique my writing? It is a mixture of short stories and poetry.

Thanks In Advance,
Jerry